how hard you had to hit the old typewriter summer shower
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like this one a lot
think present tense would even make it stronger
if I may be so bold as to offerhow hard you have to hit the old typewriter summer shower
please take no offense I am a fan of your many one-liners
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No offense taken. I’m always happy for some constructive criticism.
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