how hard you had to hit the old typewriter summer shower

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  1. like this one a lot
    think present tense would even make it stronger
    if I may be so bold as to offer

    how hard you have to hit the old typewriter summer shower

    please take no offense I am a fan of your many one-liners
    –Peter

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